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I need help revising my literature review to my professor standards. Please see below for his comments.This reads more like a research paper than a Review of literature.You should keep in mind the purposes of literature review—either [1] to survey an area of scholarly/scientific research and establish its parameters prior to making a new contribution to it [gaps paper?] ; or [2] to rationalize a contribution or a claim as new or fresh. On the whole, you have done a very good job with this assignment. It just need careful editing and some more perhaps contrastive analysis [?]

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